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XPost: alt.fan.starwars
From: anybody@anywhere-anytime.com

In article
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Caruso  wrote:

> This is a story dealing with an alternative ending to "Revenge of
> Sith" and introducing a new kind of Jedi I have created.  I hope it is
> enjoyable!

As a story it looks OK (although I have only skimmed over it), but as
an alternate ending to Episode III it's rubbish - unless you mean
altrnate universe ending. From later episodes we know Anakin is Darth
Vader, something your story seems to completely ignore.

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