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   On 11/10/2020 2:10 p.m., Denis Mosko : All wrote:   
      
      
      
    DM> Lovely 3 bedroom apartment located in City, tourist area   
    DM> near River, area SUPERMARKET. All infrastructure and   
    DM> amenities are close by. Total covered area of flat is 20,   
    DM> fully renovated. Apartment features bedroom, living room   
    DM> with open-plan kitchen, bathroom and a shower, balcony,   
    DM> River view. Apartment is furnished and washing machine is   
    DM> installed throughout. Covered parking.   
      
    DM> Is it ok?   
      
   The most glaring problem would be this sentence:   
      
    "Apartment is furnished and washing machine is   
    installed throughout."   
      
      
   I'd make it:   
      
   "Apartment is fully furnished, including an in-suite washing machine."   
      
      
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