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   On 2/16/2020 2:03 PM, between "Anton Shepelev : August Abolins":   
      
    AS> But more amenable to parsing than, say, in M.R.   
    AS> James's "Jolly corner":   
      
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    AS> This entire paragraph feels to me like a bumpy road   
    AS> whereover one (I) can hardly walk wighout he trips all the   
    AS> time and falls often, hurting one's knees. I know this   
    AS> sentence is dubious, but plead to Edrawd Albee, who wrote   
    AS> (IIRC):   
      
   I concur.  That example was brutal! and hard to remain interested in reading.   
      
   It reminded me of "stream of consciousness" style of writing.   
      
      
    AS> A man can put up with only so much without he descends a   
    AS> rung or two down the old evolutionary ladder.   
      
   That is probably why writers/authors need a good editor/publisher who can   
   suggest improvements.   
      
      
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