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|    Ardith Hinton to alexander koryagin    |
|    How to put it better?    |
|    08 Jan 15 23:56:06    |
      Hi, Alexander! Recently I wrote in a message to you:              AH> (IIRC it generally takes about two weeks to travel from       AH> Whitehorse in the Yukon to Fairbanks in Alaska by dog sled       AH> ... but there is a mountain range between these places.)                      Seems to me you & I chatted a while ago about how the placement of       adverbs & adverbial phrases may be somewhat flexible in English. Here is an       example. I realized after posting the above that I could have put it better       too. From a stylistic POV it would be preferable to say:               (IIRC it generally takes about two weeks to travel by dog        sled from Whitehorse in the Yukon to Fairbanks in Alaska        ... but there is a mountain range between these places.)               The placement of "by dog sled" is flexible. But I think the whole       sentence is more effective, and easier to read, when all of the geographical       information appears as a single unit with a minimum of interruption.... ;-)                                   --- timEd/386 1.10.y2k+        * Origin: Wits' End, Vancouver CANADA (1:153/716)    |
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