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Joseph,
Here is a script I submitted to TNG. You are welcome to put it
in the archives if you would like. The archives are great;
I've read a lot of what's there on alt.startrek.creative,
but it looks like there's a lot more waiting for me.
-Steve 

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Here is a copy of my rejected TNG script, "Secession". I would welcome
any comments or criticisms. The script came back exactly eight weeks after 
I sent it off. The rejection letter, as expected, says little except
to remind me that I am only allowed two tries. This was my first.

Writers shouldn't use this format as a guide. I wrote the script on my
Mac using Microsoft Word, which is great, but I've left behind some of
the formatting info in bringing it over to my Unix machine. 


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STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION

"Secession"

Copyright (C) 1992 Stephen P. Cole

TEASER

FADE IN:

EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)

The Enterprise flies at warp speed.

PICARD (V.O.)
Captain's Log, Stardate 46095.7. 
The Enterprise is on a diplomatic 
mission to Denarra Three, a 
Federation world on the verge of 
secession. Our job is to convince 
them to remain part of the 
alliance.

INT. PICARD'S READY ROOM

PICARD is talking to Starfleet Admiral BURKE, 
who is shown on the screen.

BURKE
Denarra Three began as an Earth 
colony. But because of its remote 
location, contact with the rest 
of the Federation has always been 
limited.

PICARD
That explains why I know so 
little about it.

BURKE
This isolation is the root of the 
problem. As the rest of the 
Federation has advanced 
technologically, Denarra Three 
has not.
(a beat)
Denarrans think that we're overly 
dependent on technology; that 
we're being dehumanized by 
devices such as replicators and 
holodecks. They see secession as 
the best way to prevent our 
technology from contaminating 
their society.

PICARD
So our job is to show them that 
despite our technology, we're not 
all that bad?

BURKE
Precisely. Governor Lang, their 
leader, opposes secession. He 
asked for a starship to visit. He 
hopes that you will allay the 
fears of his people, which are 
based more on rumor and hearsay 
than actual experience.

PICARD
Given its isolation, it would 
seem that Denarra Three has 
effectively seceded already. Why 
do we care if they formalize it?

BURKE
A couple of reasons. Defections 
are never good for an alliance. 
Also, we fear that an independent 
Denarra III, given its lack of 
defenses, would not last long. 
The Denarrans don't seem to fully 
appreciate this point.

EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)

The Enterprise is coming into orbit around 
Denarra Three.

INT. GOVERNOR'S OFFICE

Denarrans are preparing for the arrival of the 
Enterprise crew. Governor LANG and his wife AUDREY 
stand at the front of the room. Senator KELLER, 
leader of the Denarran legislature, stands off to 
one side.

LANG
Please, everyone, take your 
places. The Federation visitors 
will be here in a moment.

An AIDE approaches Keller from behind and taps him 
on the shoulder.

AIDE
Senator Keller?

Keller takes the aide aside, away from the crowd.

KELLER 
(softly)
Is everything ready?

AIDE
Yes, Senator.

KELLER
Good. Today the Enterprise crew 
will give us the final excuse we 
need to break away from the 
Federation forever.

Governor Lang turns to his wife.

LANG
Audrey, where's Sarah?

SARAH, who is about ten years old, approaches her 
parents.

AUDREY
Darling, please stand over here.

Audrey positions Sarah slightly to one side, near 
some other people. Everyone settles down. In the 
center of the room, Picard, Riker, Beverly, and 
Troi materialize. While this is happening, a hand 
surreptitiously places a hypo-syringe against 
Sarah's back, and we hear a faint hiss. But in the 
excitement, neither Sarah nor anyone else notices. 

LANG
Ladies and gentlemen of the 
starship Enterprise, welcome to 
Denarra Three. I am Governor 
Richard Lang.

PICARD
Thank you, Governor. I am Captain 
Jean-Luc Picard. May I present my 
first officer, Commander William 
Riker; our chief medical officer, 
Doctor Beverly Crusher; and 
Deanna Troi, ship's counselor.

LANG
May I introduce Senator David 
Keller, leader of our 
legislature. 

Keller nods to the Enterprise crew.

LANG (CONT.)
Also I would like to present my 
wife, Audrey.

Lang turns to acknowledge Audrey. Just as he does 
so, however, Sarah collapses and falls to the 
floor. Audrey turns.

AUDREY
Sarah!

Beverly reaches the girl first. She checks that she 
is breathing and has a pulse, then pulls out her 
pocket medical scanner and scans the girl. After a 
moment, Sarah opens her eyes, looks confused by all 
the attention, and tries to move.

BEVERLY
There, just lie still for a 
moment. How do you feel? 

SARAH
A little dizzy.

Someone produces a cup of water. Beverly gives the 
girl a drink, and pockets her medical scanner.

BEVERLY
It was probably just the 
excitement. You're going to be 
fine.

SARAH
I feel better. The dizziness is 
gone now.

Lang and Audrey help Sarah to stand.

LANG
Doctor, thank you. Audrey, why 
don't you take Sarah home to rest 
a little? You can catch up with 
us later.

Audrey nods, then she and Sarah exit.

LANG
(to Picard)
Well, Captain, I would like to 
show you our capital, if that 
suits you.

PICARD
By all means, Governor, we are 
eager to see it.

EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)

The Enterprise is in orbit around Denarra Three.

INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM

O'BRIEN is at the console. Picard, Riker, Beverly, 
and Troi materialize on the platform and step down.

RIKER
An interesting tour.

PICARD
Agreed. Conference in one hour to 
compare notes and discuss our 
plans for the rest of the visit.

Picard exits.

TROI 
(to Beverly and Riker)
Care to join me in Ten Forward?

Riker nods in agreement.

BEVERLY
You two go ahead; I'll catch up. 
I need to check in at sickbay.

INT. PICARD'S READY ROOM

Picard is seated behind his desk. The door signal 
sounds.

PICARD
Come.

Beverly enters and approaches the desk.

BEVERLY
Captain, I just stopped in 
sickbay to have a more detailed 
look at the scan I made of the 
Governor's daughter. I found 
something very disturbing.

PICARD
What's that?

BEVERLY
She's dying.

FADE OUT.

END OF TEASER

ACT ONE

FADE IN:

INT. CONFERENCE ROOM

Picard, Riker, Beverly, Troi, Data, Geordi, and 
Worf are present.

RIKER
Dying - how?

BEVERLY
She has a disease known as 
Phillips' Syndrome. It attacks 
the central nervous system.

RIKER
I'm not familiar with it.

BEVERLY
With good reason. The disease was 
eradicated elsewhere in the 
Federation over one hundred and 
fifty years ago.

Riker is puzzled.

RIKER
Eradicated? But then...

BEVERLY
Synthesis of the drug needed to 
cure it involves bombarding 
another compound with high-energy 
radiation. Denarra Three lacks 
the necessary technology.

PICARD
And what they can't produce given 
their level of technology, they 
don't want. 

TROI
It must be difficult to adhere to 
such an ideology when it costs 
lives.

Beverly nods.

BEVERLY
Hundreds of lives per year, I 
would guess.

RIKER
Do you think they know?

BEVERLY
Probably; there are some symptoms 
even at this early stage. But I 
think we need to be sure. I think 
we have to tell them what we 
found.

PICARD
Agreed. But I must emphasize, 
Doctor, that we will do nothing 
more unless they ask us to. 
Having us force our technology on 
them is exactly what these people 
don't want.

BEVERLY
I agree completely, Captain.

EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)

Enterprise still in orbit around Denarra Three.

BEVERLY (V.O.)
Medical Log, Stardate 46096.2. 
Following my discovery that 
Governor Lang's daughter has a 
fatal disease, Captain Picard has 
asked the Governor to meet with 
us. At the Governor's invitation, 
we are beaming down to his home.

INT. GOVERNOR'S RESIDENCE

Picard and Beverly materialize in a corner. 
Governor Lang and Audrey approach them.

LANG
Captain, Doctor, welcome.

PICARD
Governor Lang, Mrs. Lang. Thank 
you for inviting us into your 
home. I asked for this meeting so 
we could discuss a serious 
personal matter.

Lang and Audrey exchange pained expressions.

LANG
It's about Sarah, isn't it?

BEVERLY
Then you know?

LANG
Yes. Please, come and sit down.

Picard and Beverly sit down; Lang and Audrey sit 
opposite them.

LANG
I was afraid of this since you 
took out that scanner, Doctor.
(a beat)
We've known about the disease for 
almost two years now. Sarah 
complained of a soreness in her 
legs. Audrey took her to the 
Doctor, who made the diagnosis.

Audrey grimaces. Lang takes her hand in his.

PICARD
We are sorry to have troubled you 
with our visit. We felt it was 
important, in case you were 
unaware of the disease, to let 
you know so that your daughter 
could be treated.

LANG
We sincerely appreciate your 
concern.

AUDREY 
(sobbing softly)
Yes, we do. It was very 
thoughtful of you to come.

Lang puts his arm around his wife.

BEVERLY
At the risk of troubling you 
further, I feel it necessary to 
make sure you understand that, 
elsewhere in the Federation, a 
cure exists for this disease.

Picard shows some surprise at these words; he 
wasn't going to mention the cure. Audrey sobs 
loudly. Lang tries to comfort her.

LANG
Darling, please.

Lang is unable to calm his wife and decides it is 
best to take her out of the room. He stands.

LANG
Here, let me take you into the 
bedroom. You must rest.

Lang raises Audrey to her feet, and escorts her 
from the room. Picard and Beverly stand and look on 
helplessly. Lang returns alone seconds later.

PICARD
Governor, I'm so terribly 
sorry...

LANG
It's all right, Captain. I'm sure 
you can understand how difficult 
this has been. Yes, we know 
there's a cure. All Denarrans 
know. It must seem to you that we 
are cruel and heartless to allow 
our daughter to suffer when a 
cure is available. 
 
>From Beverly's expression, it is clear that to her, 
such a system does seem cruel.

BEVERLY
Would it really detract from the 
purity of your planet's way of 
life to accept Federation 
technology in just this one 
instance?

LANG
No, Doctor, I don't think that it 
would. But once an exception is 
made, it would be easy to make 
another, and another.
(a beat)
We sincerely believe that 
importing modern Federation 
technology would greatly harm our 
society. So we have had to draw 
the line somewhere. We do what we 
can with our own level of 
technology. No exceptions.

Beverly frowns at these words, but Picard's 
expression betrays no emotion. During the following 
exchange, while Picard tries to smooth over the 
earlier unpleasantness, Beverly continues to look 
downcast.
 
PICARD
Speaking for the Federation, I 
want you to know that we respect 
your right to make that decision. 
We are here to help - but only if 
you ask.

LANG
I appreciate that, Captain. My 
belief is that when other 
Denarrans hear you say that, the 
move to secede will lose 
momentum.

PICARD
I sincerely hope so.

LANG
I wish to thank you both for 
having the courage to bring us 
this difficult news. I'll see you 
at this evening's reception.

PICARD
Until this evening, Governor.

INT. BEVERLY'S QUARTERS

Beverly is alone, relaxing.

COMPUTER (V.O.)
Doctor Beverly Crusher: 
communication requested from 
Audrey Lang. Point of origin: 
planet Denarra Three.

Beverly sits up and looks attentively at the 
screen.

BEVERLY
On screen.

The Governor's wife Audrey appears on the screen.

BEVERLY
Mrs. Lang, hello.

AUDREY
Doctor I...just called to thank 
you for your interest in my 
daughter. It was very touching to 
see such concern from a stranger.

BEVERLY
You're most welcome. The concern 
is genuine. I wish there were a 
way to cure her.

AUDREY
My husband has long advocated 
asking the Federation for 
assistance in such life-or-death 
cases. It is his hope that one 
day that will come to pass, and 
that our daughter will be cured.

Beverly, thinking that the girl may be cured after 
all, smiles.

BEVERLY
I hope he's right.

AUDREY
I'm afraid it won't happen. The 
secessionist movement is stronger 
than my husband will admit. I 
think secession is imminent.
(a beat) 
When it comes, all contact with 
the Federation, and all hope of 
ever seeing my daughter cured, 
will vanish.

BEVERLY
I'm sorry to hear you say that.

AUDREY
So you see, the reason I broke 
down last night is because I see 
your visit
(sobbing)
as our last chance to get Sarah 
cured.

Audrey sobs some more. Beverly waits until she has 
regained her composure before continuing.

BEVERLY
Have you discussed your feelings 
with your husband?

AUDREY
Yes, but I've gotten nowhere. For 
him to agree with me would be for 
him to admit defeat. He can't.

BEVERLY
It's a terrible situation. I wish 
there were some way I could help.

AUDREY
Doctor, I have been thinking. 
Richard will never ask you for 
help; in his position he cannot. 
But what if I were to ask you to 
cure our daughter, without his 
knowledge?

Beverly, shocked at first, thinks for a moment and 
realizes that it could work.

BEVERLY
Federation law states clearly 
that a request from either parent 
is sufficient authorization for 
medical treatment of a child.
(a beat) 
But if we were to cure her, it 
would mean bringing foreign 
technology to Denarra Three. That 
could seriously damage 
Federation-Denarran relations.

Audrey is prepared for this objection.

AUDREY
I believe I could keep it secret 
for quite some time. Our doctors 
can do nothing for Sarah, so 
there is no need for her to be 
examined. Also there are rare 
instances of remission with 
Phillips' syndrome; we could 
always attribute it to that.
(a beat)
Doctor, I realize I'm asking a 
lot. But I'm desperate. Can you 
help me?

Beverly wants to say yes, but not behind Picard's 
back.

BEVERLY
Possibly, but it is a delicate 
situation. I will have to discuss 
it with Captain Picard.

AUDREY
By all means, Doctor. Please do.

INT. PICARD'S READY ROOM

Beverly is standing. Picard is seated behind his 
desk. They are clearly in the middle of a somewhat 
heated discussion. 

PICARD
It is absolutely out of the 
question.

BEVERLY
I don't see why. These people are 
Federation citizens. Under 
Federation law, one parent's 
request is sufficient for me to 
act.

PICARD
Legally, yes. But you have to 
look at the larger picture, 
Beverly. It's not just the 
Governor who doesn't want us to 
help. It's their whole society.

BEVERLY
Frankly, I don't think their 
society ought to get to vote 
here.

Picard stands up and walks toward Beverly.

PICARD
Suppose that you used our 
technology to cure the Governor's 
daughter and, somehow, it became 
known? What would Denarrans think 
of us? Willfully disregarding one 
of their most highly-prized 
principles. How would they be 
able to trust the Federation in 
the future?

BEVERLY
We could do it in such a way that 
the cure remains a secret.

PICARD
Possibly. But I'm trying to get 
the Denarran people to trust us. 
How can I do that while you are 
simultaneously sneaking around on 
some secret mission?

BEVERLY
I think that these political 
considerations have to be 
secondary. There's a girl down 
there, dying. Her mother has 
asked me to cure her. How can 
anything else be more important?

PICARD
These other considerations do 
matter. We have a mission to 
fulfill here. What you propose to 
do could put that mission in 
serious jeopardy.

Beverly paces around the room a little, gathering 
her thoughts for one more try.

BEVERLY
The girl will likely die unless 
we help now, Captain. 
(a beat)
How can you let her die?

Picard frowns.

PICARD
Doctor, I'm afraid we've reached 
an impasse. My position is firm. 
(a beat)
I understand how difficult this 
situation is for you.
Regrettably, given the 
circumstances, I must refuse to 
let you help them.

BEVERLY
(coldly)
I see.

Beverly turns and exits.

INT. BEVERLY'S QUARTERS

Beverly is seated before the same viewscreen as 
before. She presses a button. Audrey appears on the 
screen.

AUDREY
Doctor, have you spoken to the 
Captain already?

BEVERLY
Yes I have. I'm afraid that 
despite all my arguments, he 
refused to let me help you.

Audrey is clearly disappointed by the news.

AUDREY
I'm not surprised. Like my 
husband, Captain Picard is 
constrained by his position.
(a beat)
Thank you for trying.

Beverly's resigned demeanor suddenly changes to one 
of anxious determination.

BEVERLY
Mrs. Lang, wait. I can't do this. 
I want to give you the medicine.
 
AUDREY
But you would be disobeying your 
Captain. 

BEVERLY
The Captain asks me to put 
political considerations before 
my oath as a physician. I can't 
do that.
(a beat) 
I cannot allow your daughter to 
die.

AUDREY
If it were to become known, it 
would ruin your career.

BEVERLY
You're going to keep it secret. 
And if it does come out, I am 
prepared to accept the 
consequences.

Audrey thinks for a moment.

AUDREY
Doctor, I am so very desperate. 
If you are sure that you want to 
go through with it, I will accept 
your help.

Beverly smiles confidently.

BEVERLY
I am absolutely sure. Here's what 
we'll do. I'll bring a small vial 
containing the medicine to this 
evening's reception. I'll give it 
to you when no one is watching. 
You can administer it to your 
daughter later.

AUDREY
I won't give it to her until it 
becomes clear that all other 
avenues of obtaining the drug 
have been closed. This will 
minimize the risk to both of us.

BEVERLY
Very well.

AUDREY
Oh Doctor, thank you so much. I 
will never forget your kindness.

BEVERLY
I'll see you this evening.

Audrey's image is replaced by the Starfleet logo. 
Beverly stares at the screen in silence.

FADE OUT.

END OF ACT ONE


ACT TWO

FADE IN:

EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE

The Enterprise is in orbit around Denarra Three.

PICARD (V.O.)
Captain's Log, Stardate 46096.8. 
This evening, Governor Lang of 
Denarra Three is holding a 
reception in our honor. This will 
be an important opportunity for 
my officers to make a good 
impression on those Denarrans who 
distrust the Federation. 

INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM

Data, Geordi, Worf, Beverly, and Troi are present, 
ready to beam down. O'Brien is there to operate the 
transporter. Picard and Riker enter.

PICARD
Everyone ready?

The officers move toward the transporter platform. 
Data hesitates.

DATA 
(to Picard)
Captain, may I have a word with 
you before we beam down?

Picard stops and turns toward Data.

PICARD
Of course, Mister Data, what is 
it?

DATA
With all due respect, sir, it 
would seem that my presence, 
since I am the very embodiment of 
Federation technology, may cause 
these people some discomfort. 
Perhaps it would be better if I 
were to remain on board?

PICARD
Thank you for your suggestion, 
Mister Data. I am somewhat 
ashamed to admit that, at first, 
I had the same thought. 
(a beat)
But nothing is to be gained by 
hiding anything from these 
people. They are deciding whether 
to close their door to the rest 
of the Federation, forever. Let 
us show them who we, the rest of 
the Federation, are - with no 
reservations. Then let them 
decide.

DATA
Very well, sir.

All step up onto the transporter platform.

INT. GOVERNOR'S OFFICE

The room has been redecorated for the reception. 
Governor Lang and his wife Audrey are talking to 
Picard, Data, and Geordi. Senator Keller and his 
aide are watching them from a distance. Both are 
repulsed by the presence of Data.

AIDE
They treat the robot as if he 
were a normal member of the crew.

KELLER
He represents everything we fear 
in the Federation. How long will 
it be before we are visited by 
ships staffed entirely by robots 
like him?

AIDE
A frightening prospect.

KELLER
I have to go and act civil toward 
them. Stay alert.

The aide nods. Keller walks over to join the group. 
As he arrives, Audrey is asking Geordi a question.

AUDREY
Mister LaForge, forgive my 
curiosity, but what is the 
purpose of the apparatus covering 
your eyes?

GEORDI
This visor allows me to see, Mrs. 
Lang. I was born blind. 
(He removes the visor.) 
The visor feeds visual 
information directly to my visual 
cortex through these two 
implants.

Geordi points to the implants, then replaces the 
visor.

KELLER
Does this give you normal vision?

GEORDI
No, Senator. My vision is quite 
different. I see a wider band of 
radiation than does the unaided 
eye.

KELLER
I see. Then why is it that 
everyone does not receive such 
implants and wear a visor, if 
there are benefits?

GEORDI
Well, the system isn't perfect. 
The visor causes a certain amount 
of pain.

KELLER
But if it were not for the pain, 
everyone would follow your 
example?

GEORDI
Well...no. While there is some 
advantage, it is minor. Even if 
it were a major advantage, and 
there were no pain, I don't think 
anyone would want to do it. The 
system nature gave us works 
pretty well - in most cases. Why 
tamper with it?

KELLER
In a sense, that is the 
underlying philosophy of our 
world.

PICARD
It is a philosophy that we truly 
appreciate. Starfleet's 
overriding concern in our 
dealings with you is to protect 
your planet's unique way of life.

LANG
A progressive attitude for which 
we are very thankful.

Keller turns his attention from Geordi's visor to 
Data. He studies Data for a moment.

KELLER
(to Riker)
Are robot officers common in the 
Federation now, Commander?

RIKER
No, Senator, Commander Data is 
unique. With all due respect, I 
must say that I find the word 
"robot" inappropriate. Mister 
Data is third in command of the 
Enterprise. That says something 
about his abilities.

Keller is surprised to hear that Data is in the 
chain of command.

KELLER
It says something, certainly.
(to Data)
Commander Data, do you suppose it 
is just a matter of time before 
individuals such as yourself are 
produced in large quantities?

DATA
Duplicating my design has proven 
difficult for Federation 
scientists, Senator. But since 
one man was able to design me, it 
is reasonable to assume that 
continued work by others will 
eventually allow them to 
duplicate my functionality, if 
not my exact design.

KELLER
I suppose that one day, starships  
will be staffed entirely by 
beings such as yourself.

DATA
I believe that is unlikely, sir. 
Humans appear to me to have an 
insatiable desire to explore 
space. I do not believe that they 
would be content to give up that 
pursuit. 

KELLER
But this exploration is risky. 
Many thousands have died. Instead 
they could remain at home, each 
in his own perfect, holodeck-
generated world, and leave 
everything else to beings such as 
you, Mister Data. 
(a beat)
That is what we see in the future 
of the Federation, and it 
frightens us. That is why we want 
to secede.

There is an awkward pause. The Senator's words have 
made everyone else uncomfortable. Audrey breaks the 
silence by changing the subject. 

AUDREY
Captain, what do you think of 
Denarra?

PICARD
I find it a delightful place.  
There is a great appeal to the 
society that you have created 
here. I am convinced that, were 
the fine qualities of Denarra 
Three better-known elsewhere in 
the Federation, it would have a 
positive impact on Federation 
life.

Beverly and Troi approach the group, but Troi stops 
Beverly before they reach it.

TROI
Beverly, are you all right? You 
seem very nervous.

BEVERLY
I'm fine. I just dislike official 
functions.

Lang sees the two women approach.

LANG
Ah, Doctor Crusher, Counselor 
Troi, do join us.

TROI
We would be delighted to, 
Governor.

They join the group. Beverly stands next to Audrey.

LANG
Captain Picard was telling us 
earlier about some of the other 
Federation races, whom we here on 
Denarra know so little about.
(to Troi) 
I hadn't realized that you are 
from Betazed, Counselor.

TROI
Yes I am, Governor, though I am 
only half Betazoid.

LANG
Yet you possess some of that 
race's unique powers?

TROI
Yes. But while full Betazoids are 
telepathic, I am merely able to 
sense the emotional states of 
others.

BEVERLY
(to Audrey)
Mrs. Lang, the table is set with 
some interesting-looking foods. 
Would you be so kind as to 
describe some of them to me?

AUDREY
Of course, Doctor. 

Beverly and Audrey move off toward the table, 
leaving the rest of the group behind. Troi's eyes 
can be seen following them.

LANG
I imagine that such an ability 
can be quite useful in many 
situations.

TROI
Um...

Troi, still watching Beverly and Audrey, shifts her 
eyes back to the Governor. 

TROI
Yes, it can be.

Beverly and Audrey have moved off. Beverly is 
admiring some of the foods on the table.

BEVERLY
These look lovely.

AUDREY
Cooking is a serious art on 
Denarra. As you can see, our 
chefs get quite fancy.

Beverly reaches into her pocket and pulls out the 
vial containing the medicine.

BEVERLY
(Whispering) 
Here is the vial.

Beverly hands the vial surreptitiously to Audrey. 
Approaching quickly from across the room, unknown 
to them, are Senator Keller and the aide.

KELLER
(Loudly) 
May I see what Doctor Crusher is 
giving to you, Mrs. Lang?

Beverly and Audrey, startled, turn to face the 
opposition leader. Keller's loud voice has 
attracted the attention of all those in the room. 
Picard and Riker are moving in, as is the Governor. 
Audrey still holds the vial in her hand. She and 
Beverly are panic-striken and say nothing.

LANG
Audrey, what is going on?

KELLER
Governor, I observed Doctor 
Crusher giving something to Mrs. 
Lang. In view of our serious 
restrictions on imports...

Lang takes the vial from Audrey's hand.

LANG
What is this?

AUDREY
Oh it's nothing, really. This is 
mine, a vitamin supplement I have 
been taking. I was showing it to 
the Doctor and asking her opinion 
of its usefulness.

Beverly nods, trying to support Audrey's story.

KELLER
I respectfully suggest that 
explanation is not correct. And I 
am willing to back my assertion 
with a recording made of a 
conversation between these two 
this afternoon, discussing their 
plan to bring this alien 
substance to our world.

PICARD
Doctor, I demand an explanation, 
now.

BEVERLY
The Senator is correct. The vial 
contains medication that would 
cure the Governor's daughter of 
her terminal illness. I take full 
responsibility for my actions in 
bringing it here.

AUDREY
No, it was my idea, I asked her 
to do it.

KELLER
How ironic, that as we sit here 
discussing whether continued 
contact with the Federation will 
contaminate our culture, the 
first step in this infiltration 
is taking place across the room.

AIDE
We see now that all the 
Federation's promises of non-
interference are empty ones.

BEVERLY
I was acting on my own behalf. 
The responsibility is mine alone.

KELLER
No doubt a defense that will be 
used again and again if we allow 
it.

LANG
Audrey, I...

AUDREY
I had to do it, Richard. For 
Sarah. I knew that though you 
love her with your whole heart, 
you could never make such a 
request.

Governor Lang, absorbed by his wife's confession, 
looks up, and realizes that he must deal with the 
situation at hand.

LANG
Captain, I think it may be best 
if you return to your ship at 
this time. After both sides have 
had a chance to calm down, we can 
discuss the matter further.

PICARD
I think that's a good suggestion, 
Governor.

The Enterprise officers move off a little. Picard 
taps his communicator pin.

PICARD
Picard to Enterprise.

O'BRIEN (V.O.)
O'Brien here, sir.

PICARD
Beam us up, Mister O'Brien.

The Enterprise crew disappear. Keller and his aide, 
watching them go, are a bit apart from the rest of 
the party. Keller smiles.

KELLER
(to Aide)
I think the matter of secession 
may soon be settled.

INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM

O'Brien is at the controls. Picard, Riker, Beverly, 
Troi, Data, Worf, and Geordi materialize on the 
platform and step down.

O'BRIEN
You're back early. Boring party?

Riker silences O'Brien with a stern look, and 
motions for him to follow Riker out of the room. 
Geordi, Data, and Worf file out as well. Troi 
hesitates slightly, looking at Beverly, then exits. 
Beverly stands facing the transporter console. 
Picard is behind her. There is a lengthy, awkward 
silence.

PICARD
Beverly, how could you?

Beverly turns to face Picard.

BEVERLY
We were that little girl's last 
chance. For me to refuse to help 
was to condemn her to death. I 
couldn't do that. How could you 
ask me to do that?

PICARD
But the consequences of your 
action could be enormous. This 
could be the final straw that 
ensures secession.

Beverly walks toward the platform, then turns back 
to face Picard.

BEVERLY
I know. I was certain that we 
could keep it a secret.
(a beat)
I stand by my actions as 
permissible under Federation law. 
But I did disobey your orders, 
Captain, and I am prepared to 
accept the consequences.

PICARD
Speaking personally, while I 
question your priorities, I 
admire your courage in making 
what must have been a difficult 
decision. If there are 
repercussions to this incident, I 
want you to know that I will do 
everything in my power to support 
you.

BEVERLY
Thank you, Captain.

PICARD
But now, speaking as Captain of 
the Enterprise, I'm afraid that 
the Denarrans will interpret 
leniency on my part as an 
endorsement of your actions. 
Therefore you are temporarily 
relieved of your duties and 
confined to your quarters.

BEVERLY
I understand.

Beverly exits; Picard is left alone.

FADE OUT.

END OF ACT TWO


ACT THREE

FADE IN:

EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)

Enterprise in orbit around Denarra Three.

INT. MAIN BRIDGE

Picard, Riker, Data, and Worf are present.
Governor Lang appears on the screen. He looks 
exhausted and worried.

LANG
The incident has set in motion a 
crisis situation in our 
government. Many are calling for 
immediate secession, and for my 
removal from office. But I think 
I have managed to consolidate my 
position.

PICARD
I'm pleased to hear that.

LANG
You may not be, Captain. I only 
managed to do so by publicly 
expressing deep concern over the 
incident, and advocating that we 
re-evaluate our position with 
regard to continued Federation 
membership.

Picard frowns.

PICARD
Do you think secession is 
inevitable?

LANG
I think there is only one way to 
avoid secession: that is for the 
Federation to make it clear that 
it does not approve of Doctor 
Crusher's actions. If you are 
able to distance yourself from 
her, the incident may blow over.

PICARD
I have already informed Starfleet 
of the situation. I have been 
instructed to convene a formal 
inquiry at Starbase 117. We are 
departing for the starbase now. I 
will keep you informed as the 
inquiry progresses.

EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)

The Enterprise flies at warp speed.

INT. TEN FORWARD

Troi is seated alone at a table. Riker enters and 
crosses the room to join her.

TROI
What is the news from the bridge?

RIKER
The Denarrans say our only chance 
to salvage the situation is to 
make Beverly the scapegoat. The 
Captain has set course for 
Starbase 117 where a full inquiry 
will take place.

Troi is saddened by the news.

TROI
I think the Captain should be 
more supportive of Beverly. After 
all, what she did is legally 
permissible under Federation law. 
One might even argue that her 
medical oath obligated her to 
provide the medicine.

RIKER
Those arguments are interesting, 
but not sufficient justification 
for disobeying one's commanding 
officer.

Troi had hoped for a different response.

TROI
I guess it is the trademark of a 
good first officer to follow his 
Captain, no matter what.

Riker frowns.

RIKER
Well thank you very much for that 
fine compliment, Counselor.

TROI
I'm sorry, I didn't mean to give 
offense. I just meant that if you 
tried to look at things from 
Beverly's point of view...

Riker stands, and pushes in his chair.

RIKER
(his voice rising)
I have. The Doctor did a very 
courageous thing. But she was 
wrong. You seem to think I say 
that simply because the Captain 
has said it. But it's what I 
truly believe. I'm not a robot, 
blindly agreeing with Picard's 
every move.

Riker turns to leave.

TROI
Will, wait...

Riker ignores her and exits from Ten Forward.

INT. MAIN BRIDGE

Riker is seated in the command chair. Worf is also 
present. Geordi enters and approaches Riker.

GEORDI
Commander, how long do you think 
we'll be stopped at Starbase 117?

RIKER
Several days at least. Probably 
more like a week. Why do you ask?

GEORDI
I hate to discuss trivial matters 
at a time like this, but I've 
noticed a slight drop in the 
efficiency of the warp engines. 
Nothing serious, but there is 
some routine maintenance that I'd 
like to do while we're at the 
starbase. I'll need the engines 
off line for at least two days.

RIKER
You've got it, no problem.

Worf's console beeps.

WORF
Commander, message coming in from 
Starbase 117. They are informing 
us that the U.S.S. Exeter and the 
U.S.S. Victory have altered their 
courses and will join us at the 
starbase. What they don't say is, 
why. I'm confused.

RIKER
Here's a hint, Mister Worf. With 
those two ships and the 
Enterprise in port, there will be 
three officers of command rank 
present.

GEORDI 
(in disbelief)
Court martial?

RIKER
I have no idea if it'll come to 
that. But one way or another, 
Starfleet wants a speedy 
resolution to the situation, 
since it could affect events on 
Denarra Three.

INT. TROI'S QUARTERS

Troi is seated, gazing idly out the window. The 
door signal sounds.

TROI
Come in.

Riker enters. Troi stands and goes toward him. She 
is glad to see him.

TROI
Will...

RIKER
I'm sorry for what happened 
earlier, Deanna.

TROI
No, I'm the one who should be 
apologizing. I'm so sorry, Will.

RIKER
Beverly's situation is stressful 
for both of us. I think we just 
let it get to us a little.

TROI
You're right. And this is no time 
for us to be quarreling. Beverly 
needs us; we have to work 
together to help her.

RIKER
Absolutely. Why don't we go and 
see her, and see if there's 
anything we can do?

TROI
Good idea. She'll probably be 
alone and depressed.

They step out into the corridor and head for 
Beverly's quarters. The tension broken, they are 
both smiling.

TROI
I knew you wouldn't remain angry 
with me for long.

RIKER
Did your Betazoid powers tell you 
that?

TROI
No, I left some chocolate in your 
quarters as a peace offering.

Riker grins.

RIKER 
Ah. Well after we look in on 
Beverly, I think we should 
investigate that.

Troi nods affirmatively.

INT. BEVERLY'S QUARTERS

Beverly and Data are there. They are carefully 
studying some computer displays. Beverly points to 
one of the screens. 

BEVERLY
This sample has some of the 
desired properties. Perhaps 
selenium is the key ingredient?

DATA
A possibility. I could vary the 
amount of selenium and see if 
there is a relationship.

The door signal sounds. Beverly makes an obvious 
attempt to hide their work, turning off some 
displays. She and Data turn away from the screens 
and face the center of the room.

BEVERLY
Come in.

Riker and Troi enter. Beverly is happy to see them.

BEVERLY
Will, Deanna.

DATA
(to Beverly)
I will be going now, Doctor. I 
will come and see you later with 
my results.

Beverly nods. Data exits.

TROI
Results?

BEVERLY
Data is helping me, doing a 
little background research for 
the inquiry. Nothing important.

TROI
I must say, Beverly, I'm a bit 
surprised. We came here to cheer 
you up. But you seem anything but 
gloomy.

BEVERLY
Well, I'll try to take on a more 
appropriate air.

She frowns.

BEVERLY (CONT.) 
Seriously though, I made my 
decision, and I'm comfortable 
with it. I'm ready for whatever 
happens next.

RIKER
Beverly, don't hesitate to call 
on us if there's anything we can 
do.

TROI
Anything at all.

BEVERLY
Thank you both. From the look of 
things, I'll need all the help I 
can get.

EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)

The Enterprise flies at warp speed.

INT. MAIN BRIDGE

Riker, Troi, and Worf are present.

RIKER
Mister Worf, I haven't seen 
Commander Data on the bridge for 
some time. Isn't this normally 
his watch?

WORF
Sir, Commander Data asked to be 
excused from his shift, citing 
personal reasons. Captain Picard 
approved his request.

Riker and Troi exchange puzzled looks.

TROI
What are Beverly and Data working 
on?

Riker shrugs.

PICARD (V.O.)
Picard to Riker.

RIKER
Riker here, Captain.

PICARD (V.O.)
Number One, how long till we 
arrive at the starbase?

RIKER
A little over six hours, Captain.

PICARD (V.O.)
What would be the projected time 
at warp one?

RIKER
Warp one, sir?

PICARD (V.O.)
You heard me, Number One.

RIKER
Mister Worf?

WORF
Twenty-six hours, twenty-two 
minutes, Captain.

PICARD (V.O.)
Good. Decrease speed to warp one.

RIKER
Sir, our arrival is much 
anticipated; Starbase 117 is 
bound to inquire as to the reason 
for the delay. What shall I tell 
them?

INT. BEVERLY'S QUARTERS

Picard, Beverly, and Data are there.

PICARD
I'm sure you'll think of 
something, Number One. You always 
do.

Picard smiles.

RIKER (V.O.)
Understood, sir.

PICARD
Picard out.
(to Beverly)
You have your extra day, Doctor.

BEVERLY
Thank you, Captain. It could make 
a big difference.

INT. MAIN BRIDGE

Riker, Troi, and Worf are present.

RIKER
Mister Worf, tell Starbase 117 
that we will be delayed. 

WORF
Aye, sir. Should I give a reason?

Riker thinks for a moment.

RIKER
Yes. Tell them that our chief 
engineer is concerned about a 
drop in the efficiency of the 
warp engines, so we have had to 
reduce speed.

WORF
Aye, sir.

Troi raises her eyebrows. She and Riker smile.

TROI
I knew you'd think of something.

RIKER 
I always do.

EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)

The Enterprise flies at warp speed.

INT. ENTERPRISE CORRIDOR

Beverly and Data are walking very rapidly down the 
corridor. Riker and Troi approach from the opposite 
direction, and stop when they see Beverly, who is 
smiling broadly. 

RIKER
Doctor, aren't you supposed to be 
confined to your quarters?

Beverly and Data don't stop, slow down, or 
otherwise acknowledge Riker. They disappear around 
a corner.

RIKER
(to Troi)
Let's find out what this is all 
about.

He and Troi set off after the others.

INT. PICARD'S READY ROOM

Picard is seated at his desk. The door signal 
sounds. Picard looks up, in anticipation of saying 
"come," but the door opens before he can get the 
word out. Beverly rushes in, with Data.

PICARD
Success?

Riker and Troi enter.

BEVERLY
Yes! It works.

TROI
What works?

BEVERLY
We can cure the girl.

RIKER
I don't understand. You could 
cure the girl all along. But they 
won't allow it.

BEVERLY
No, I mean we have a way to cure 
the girl without the use of 
foreign technology.

DATA
We have come up with a new way to 
synthesize the drug needed to 
cure the girl, a way that is 
compatible with Denarra Three's 
technology.

PICARD
We slowed to give the Doctor and 
Mister Data a little more time. 
Once we got to the starbase, it 
would have been too late. 
(a beat)
Let's send a message to Denarra 
Three immediately.

INT. MAIN BRIDGE

Picard, Riker, Beverly, Troi, and Data enter from 
the ready room. Worf surrenders the command chair 
to Picard and takes his position. Data takes his 
place at the helm.

PICARD
Mister Worf, get me Governor Lang 
on Denarra Three.

WORF
Aye, sir. Hailing.

The screen comes on to show not Governor Lang, but 
his opponent, Senator Keller. Picard is surprised.

PICARD 
Senator Keller.

KELLER
Captain.

PICARD
I would like to speak with 
Governor Lang. Is he available?

KELLER
No, I'm afraid that he is not. 
You may speak to me. I am now 
Governor of Denarra Three.

FADE OUT.

END OF ACT THREE


ACT FOUR

FADE IN:

INT. MAIN BRIDGE

Picard, Riker, Data, Beverly, Troi, and Worf are 
present. Keller is shown on the viewscreen. Riker, 
Beverly and Troi are visibly shocked by Keller's 
news.

KELLER
Governor Lang suffered a vote of 
no confidence from our 
legislature, which removed him 
from office and named me as his 
successor.

PICARD
I see. Well, in that case I wish 
to tell you some very good news, 
Governor.

KELLER
News of the inquiry into the 
incident involving Doctor 
Crusher?

PICARD
Not exactly. We have yet to reach 
the starbase where the inquiry 
will take place. But Doctor 
Crusher, who has been studying 
Phillips' syndrome since we left 
your planet, has made an amazing 
discovery - she has developed a 
cure for the disease that is 
compatible with your level of 
technology.

KELLER
So?

Beverly rises from her seat and stands next to 
Picard.

BEVERLY
This means that you can 
synthesize the medicine needed to 
cure all who suffer from the 
disease, without the use of 
outside technology.

KELLER
Frankly, Captain, I am displeased 
by these last-minute theatrics. 
If you are serious about 
conducting an inquiry into the 
Doctor's conduct, then do it.

PICARD
Governor, I assure you that these 
are not theatrics. My staff have 
convinced me that her discovery 
is a genuine breakthrough.

KELLER
Captain, I await the results of 
Starfleet's inquiry into the 
Doctor's conduct. In the meantime 
I wish no further communication 
from you.

Keller closes the channel; his image is replaced by 
the star field.

PICARD
Not the reception I'd hoped for.

RIKER
The man's a fool. We've just told 
him how to save hundreds of 
lives. And he ignored us.

TROI
He used us to further his own 
political agenda, to drive 
Denarra Three further away from 
the rest of the Federation. Now 
that he's done that, he wants 
nothing more to do with us.

PICARD
If only there were a way to get 
past him. Governor Lang would be 
more receptive.

BEVERLY
Captain, when I spoke to Mrs. 
Lang, she was at their home. I 
wonder if we could contact her 
and her husband there?

WORF
The necessary information must be 
in the communications logs. I 
will search for it.

PICARD
Hopefully they won't have been 
evicted in the power struggle.

Picard notices that Beverly looks very anxious.

PICARD 
(to Beverly)
Don't worry, Beverly, we'll see 
to it that your outstanding 
effort isn't wasted.

Beverly smiles.

WORF
Captain, I believe I can contact 
the Lang residence now.

PICARD
Make it so, Mister Worf.

Lang, casually dressed, appears on the screen.

LANG
Captain! I am surprised that you 
were able to find me here in 
exile.

PICARD
I am relieved that we were able 
to, Governor.

Lang is joined on the screen by Audrey.

LANG
As you probably know, I have been 
kicked out of office. There is 
little to stand in the way of 
secession now that Keller is in 
charge. My family is fine; we are 
being left alone. Keller didn't 
even take the transmitter which I 
had at home for emergency use, 
otherwise I wouldn't be talking 
to you now.

PICARD
I spoke with Senator Keller just 
now. I was attempting to reach 
you. I wanted to tell you that 
Doctor Crusher has made an 
important discovery - with great 
implications for your family and 
many others.

Lang and Audrey look anxious, anticipating what the 
news might be. 

LANG 
What is that?

PICARD
Doctor Crusher has developed a 
means by which your people can 
produce the drug needed to cure 
your daughter's disease, with no 
outside technology required.

Lang and Audrey are overjoyed. They hug each other 
for a moment.

LANG
That's wonderful news. Doctor, 
congratulations and thank you!

BEVERLY
Your thanks are premature, 
Governor. Senator Keller is not 
interested.

LANG
Of course. Now that he's gained 
power, he's free to do just as he 
pleases.

AUDREY
He used Sarah to get what he 
wanted, and now he condemns her 
to death!

BEVERLY
He used all of us.

All are silent for a moment.

AUDREY
Is there no way for you to help 
us, Captain?

PICARD
Indeed, Mrs. Lang, I believe that 
there is. Our earlier incident 
occurred because I refused to let 
Doctor Crusher help you. Now, 
given that the Doctor's cure is 
compatible with the technology of 
Denarra Three, I will allow her 
to assist you. 

LANG
But what about Keller? 

PICARD
What about him? You are 
Federation citizens, requesting 
urgent medical assistance. He has 
no right to interfere.

BEVERLY
They may not be Federation 
citizens for very long.

PICARD
Then we must act now. Governor, 
the Enterprise will head for 
Denarra Three at the best 
possible speed. Once there, we 
will do whatever it takes to cure 
your daughter.

LANG
Thank you, Captain. I will do 
what I can to spread word of 
Doctor Crusher's discovery. It 
might force Keller to take 
notice.

PICARD
Excellent. I'm not going to 
inform Senator Keller of our 
plans, since he might seek some 
form of retaliation against you. 
But I recommend that you be 
prepared. If he does find out 
that we're coming, he could move 
against you.

LANG
Understood. I'll keep you 
informed of developments here, 
Captain.

PICARD
Good. Enterprise out.

The image of the Langs is replaced by the star 
field.

PICARD
(to Riker)
Commander, earlier you somehow 
convinced Starbase 117 that we 
needed to slow down, giving 
Doctor Crusher and Mister Data 
time to work their magic. How 
would you like to do an encore?

RIKER
Convince them that for some 
reason we now need to return to 
Denarra Three?

PICARD
Exactly.

RIKER
I'm sure I'll think of something, 
sir.

EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE

The Enterprise flies at warp speed.

INT. MAIN BRIDGE

Riker enters from the turbolift. Worf is at his 
station. Troi and Beverly are seated on opposite 
sides of the Captain's chair. Riker seats himself 
in between them.

TROI 
(to Beverly)
How long would it take them to 
synthesize the drug following 
your prescription?

BEVERLY
A day, maybe two. There's nothing 
difficult about it. 

RIKER
Let's hope they get the chance.

WORF
Commander, we are being hailed by 
Denarra Three.

RIKER
Governor Lang?

WORF
Negative. This is from Governor 
Keller's office.

RIKER
Alert the Captain.

Picard enters from his ready room. Riker stands.

RIKER 
We're being hailed by Governor 
Keller, sir.

PICARD
On screen.

Keller appears on the screen. Picard stands next to 
Riker.

KELLER
Enterprise, we have learned that 
you are en route to Denarra 
Three. You do not, I repeat, do 
not have permission to approach 
the planet.

PICARD
We are responding to an urgent 
request for medical assistance, 
Governor.

KELLER
>From whom?

PICARD
>From Governor and Mrs. Lang. They 
have asked us to provide life-
saving treatment for their 
daughter.

Keller is momentarily taken aback by the news of 
the Langs' involvement.

KELLER
You do not have my permission to 
help the Langs, or to approach 
Denarra Three.

PICARD
Given the circumstances, I don't 
see that your permission is 
required.

KELLER
Such interference would be the 
last straw; we would have no 
choice but to secede from the 
Federation. Your career would be 
ruined, Picard, along with the 
Doctor's.

PICARD
Secede then. I'll take my 
chances. But I will not allow you 
to let that girl die.

KELLER
I'll have them arrested. You'll 
never find them.

PICARD
I will stay in orbit until I do.

KELLER
We don't have your sophisticated 
weaponry, Enterprise, but we will 
fight you every way we can.

Keller closes the channel in disgust; the screen 
goes blank.

RIKER
Shall we warn the Langs?

PICARD
Yes, Number One. Mister Worf, 
open a channel.

Governor Land and Audrey appear on the screen.

PICARD
Governor, Senator Keller has 
ordered us to stay away from 
Denarra Three. I have refused to 
abide by his wishes. He has 
threatened to have you and your 
family arrested. I think you 
should seek refuge elsewhere.

LANG
We have already made some 
arrangements, Captain.

Audrey exits from the screen.

PICARD
Best not to tell me about them, 
Governor. Our communications may 
be monitored.

LANG
Understood. I am not able to take 
this transmitter with me. I will 
contact you when I am able.

PICARD
I understand. Don't worry, 
Governor, we'll find you, 
wherever you are, even if you are 
unable to contact us.

INT. GOVERNOR'S RESIDENCE

Audrey enters the room where Lang is speaking to 
Picard, who can be seen on the screen.

LANG
I imagine you will, Captain.

AUDREY
I have Sarah ready, Richard.

LANG
Good. Captain, we will say good-
bye for now.

PICARD
Good-bye Governor, and good luck.

Lang turns off the transmitter and the screen goes 
blank.

LANG
Let's go. There's not a moment to 
lose.

There is a loud knock at the door. Lang and Audrey 
look at each other, and are clearly frightened.

EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE

The Enterprise slows from warp speed to impulse.

INT. MAIN BRIDGE

Riker, Troi, Beverly, Data, and Worf are present. 
Picard enters from his ready room.

RIKER
Coming into orbit around Denarra 
Three, Captain.

PICARD
Good. Still no word from Governor 
Lang?

WORF
That's correct, sir.

PICARD
Will, we need to find the 
Governor and his family. How 
should we proceed?

RIKER
We can't do much from up here; 
there's no way to single them out 
using the sensors. I think we 
have to go down to the surface 
and look for them. It should be 
easy for our people to blend in 
with the local population.

BEVERLY
We need to move quickly. Governor 
Keller knows that we are headed 
here. I fear for the Langs' 
safety.

PICARD
Agreed. Will, I want you and 
Counselor Troi to beam down in 
the vicinity of the Governor's 
residence. Try to locate the 
Langs or, if they have been 
arrested, learn where they might 
be held. We'll add more search 
teams as needed.

RIKER
Sounds good. Let's go, Deanna.

Riker and Troi exit to the turbolift.

WORF
Sir, we are being hailed by 
Denarra Three.

PICARD
Governor Lang?

WORF
No sir, it is from the Governor's 
office. It must be Governor 
Keller.

Picard and Beverly exchange worried looks.

PICARD
Ignore him. Let's keep him 
guessing. If we acknowledge, 
he'll know we've arrived. If he 
knows we're here and he has the 
Langs in custody, there's no 
telling what he might do.

FADE OUT.

END OF ACT FOUR


ACT FIVE

FADE IN:

EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE

The Enterprise is in orbit around Denarra Three.

INT. MAIN BRIDGE

Picard, Data, Beverly, Worf, and Geordi are 
present.

PICARD
Has Governor Keller given up yet?

WORF
No sir, he continues to hail us 
periodically.

RIKER (V.O.)
Riker to Enterprise.

PICARD
Go ahead, Will. What have you 
found?

INT. CORRIDOR OUTSIDE GOVERNOR'S OFFICE

Riker and Troi are huddled against a wall. They are 
dressed in Denarran-style clothes.

RIKER
The Lang's residence is under 
guard; they are not there. No 
clue yet as to their whereabouts. 
We're now just outside the 
Governor's office. A great deal 
of confusion here; people coming 
and going constantly.

PICARD (V.O.)
Be careful. Remember, Mister 
O'Brien is standing by to beam 
you out on a moment's notice if 
needed.

RIKER
Aye, sir. Riker out.

TROI
(to Riker)
The mood here is difficult to 
describe.

RIKER
How do you mean?

TROI
I sense a jumble of emotions. 
Some people are very upset; 
others jubilant. Whatever is 
happening, it is clear that this 
is no normal day. 

RIKER
Anything to do with us?

TROI
No, I don't think so. Let's move 
down the corridor; something is 
going on just a few doors down.

They walk down the corridor. A door opens and  
Keller emerges. He sees Riker and Troi and flies 
into a rage.

KELLER
You!

Keller rushes at Riker and delivers a punch to 
Riker's chest. Riker staggers slightly. Keller 
lunges at him again. Riker lands a punch that 
knocks Keller to the ground, apparently 
unconscious.

INT. MAIN BRIDGE

Picard, Data, Beverly, Worf, and Geordi are 
present.

GEORDI
We have twenty-five teams waiting 
to beam down, Captain. Each has 
been assigned a target area in or 
near the capital.

PICARD
Good. We'll give Commander Riker 
and Counselor Troi a few more 
minutes.

RIKER (V.O.)
Riker to Picard.

PICARD
Go ahead, Will.

RIKER (V.O.)
Sir, I suggest that you reply to 
Governor Keller's hail.

PICARD
Why should I do that, Will?

RIKER (V.O.)
Please Captain, just trust me.

PICARD
On screen, Mister Worf.

Lang, Riker, and Troi appear on the screen.

PICARD
Governor Lang! What a pleasant 
surprise.

LANG
Same here, Captain. After you 
didn't answer, I was afraid that 
something had happened to you.

PICARD
Sorry Governor, I assumed the 
hail was from Governor Keller.

LANG
I exposed Governor Keller's plan 
to suppress news of Doctor 
Crusher's cure. The resulting 
condemnation eroded his support. 
He has been forced to resign. I 
have, temporarily at least, been 
put in charge.

PICARD
Excellent.

RIKER
We just ran into Keller in the 
hall. He was, shall I say, not 
very happy to see us.

Riker rubs his side, where he took the punch.

LANG
Captain, if you could transmit to 
me the details of Doctor 
Crusher's discovery, I will give 
it to our scientists, who are 
eager to get to work producing 
the drug.

PICARD
(to Worf)
Make it so, Mister Worf.

RIKER
We're ready to beam up, Captain.

LANG
I hope that you'll remain in 
orbit for a while, to view the 
results of our efforts to 
synthesize Doctor Crusher's cure.

PICARD
Absolutely. We wouldn't miss it.

EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE

The Enterprise is in orbit around Denarra Three.

PICARD (V.O.)
Captain's log, stardate 46099.7. 
The Denarrans have synthesized 
the drug needed to save the lives 
of hundreds of their people, 
using the technique discovered by 
Doctor Crusher and Mister Data. 
We have been invited to a 
ceremony honoring them for their 
accomplishment. As part of the 
ceremony, the Governor's daughter 
will be the first to receive the 
medicine.

INT. GOVERNOR'S OFFICE

Preparations are in their final stages for the 
ceremony. Among those present is Senator DAVIDSON, 
another pro-secessionist. Senator Keller's AIDE 
approaches him.

AIDE
Senator Davidson, hello.
Senator Keller sends his regards.

DAVIDSON
How is he holding up?

AIDE
While he is displeased by the 
current turn of events, I assure 
you he is as busy and as 
determined as ever.

DAVIDSON
I'm glad that he won't be here to 
witness this pathetic spectacle.

AIDE
Just look at who we are honoring. 
A woman who callously disregarded 
all our traditions, who tried to 
poison our society with foreign 
technology.

DAVIDSON
And an android, a prime example 
of the technology we so abhor. 
Our society is lost. It is only a 
matter of time before we are re-
absorbed by the rest of the 
Federation, and become 
indistinguishable from it.

AIDE
There is still one chance.

DAVIDSON
What do you mean?

Doors at one end of the office open, and Governor 
Lang, his wife Audrey, and their daughter Sarah 
enter. They walk to the front of the room. 

LANG
Friends, let us welcome our 
visitors from the U.S.S. 
Enterprise.

The door opens again. Beverly, Data, and Picard 
enter and approach the Langs. There is a round of 
applause. Riker, Troi, Worf, and Geordi enter but 
remain in the crowd. 

LANG
Doctor Beverly Crusher, and 
Lieutenant Commander Data, on 
behalf of all Denarrans, welcome. 
This is a great day for us. A 
victory has been gained over a 
disease that has tragically 
shortened many thousands of 
lives. And this victory has been 
won without compromising the 
values that our people hold dear.
(a beat)
That this day has arrived is 
wonderful. That we owe it all to 
two Starfleet officers is 
incredible. On behalf of all 
Denarrans, thank you both.

Lang leads another round of applause. In the crowd, 
Troi approaches Worf and speaks to him over the 
applause.

TROI
Stay on your guard, Mister Worf. 
I sense some anger in this room, 
directed at Beverly and Data.

WORF
Can you pinpoint the source of 
these feelings, Counselor?

TROI
No, there's too much happening; 
strong emotions everywhere. But 
some of them are definitely very 
negative. Be vigilant.

Worf moves around the room, looking for anything 
unusual, as the applause subsides.

LANG
My daughter has volunteered to be 
the first to receive this drug. 
The faith of our family in Doctor 
Crusher is absolute. Doctor, we 
would like to ask you to 
administer the drug.

BEVERLY
I am honored by this request, 
Governor.

Beverly and Sarah step forward. A tray holding a 
hypo-syringe is brought out.

LANG 
(to Beverly)
Perhaps you would like to say a 
few words first.

BEVERLY
Thank you Governor.

While Beverly speaks, Troi draws Riker, Geordi, and 
Worf together at the back of the room. 

TROI
Something's not right. That man 
over there.

Troi points to Senator Keller's aide.

RIKER
He's Senator Keller's assistant.

TROI
Yes. His emotions were very 
gloomy. But when the medicine was 
brought out, he underwent an 
enormous change. He was excited, 
filled with anticipation.

RIKER
Do you think the medicine has 
been tampered with?

TROI
I think it's possible.

WORF
We should interrupt the ceremony.

GEORDI
No, wait.

Geordi taps his communicator. 

GEORDI (CONT.)
LaForge to Enterprise.

O'BRIEN (V.O.)
Enterprise, O'Brien here.

GEORDI
Mister O'Brien, this is an 
emergency. I need a tricorder 
immediately.

INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM

O'Brien is at the transporter console.

O'BRIEN
Hold on, I've got to find one.

O'Brien scrambles off the side of the transporter 
room. After looking in a couple of places, he finds 
a tricorder. He runs to the transporter pad.

GEORDI (V.O.)
I need you to put it down right 
here at my feet.

O'Brien sets down the tricorder and runs back to 
the console.

O'BRIEN
Okay, here it comes.

O'Brien frantically adjusts the controls. The 
tricorder shimmers and disappears.

INT. GOVERNOR'S OFFICE

The tricorder materializes at Geordi's feet. He 
picks it up and begins to use it. Fortunately no 
one has noticed the commotion. Beverly is still 
speaking. There is another round of applause. 
Apparently it is time for the injection.

RIKER
(to Geordi)
You have about fifteen seconds 
before I interrupt the ceremony.

Geordi works with the tricorder.

GEORDI
I have the syringe, the outer 
casing, hold on. . . I have the 
medicine. Scanning...

Beverly reaches for the syringe. She picks it up 
and moves toward Sarah.

RIKER
Now, Mister LaForge!

Beverly takes hold of Sarah's arm. Worf looks 
extremely anxious.

BEVERLY
This won't hurt a bit.

Sarah smiles. Beverly raises the syringe toward 
Sarah's arm.

GEORDI
(shouting)
Beverly, stop!

The people at the front look up, shocked. Beverly 
lets go of Sarah's arm. The aide turns to leave the 
room in a hurry but Worf stops him roughly and 
brings him toward the front. Riker, Geordi, and 
Troi advance.

RIKER
The medicine has been tampered 
with. This man is guilty.

Riker points to the aide. Audrey hugs Sarah. 
Beverly has put down the syringe.

AIDE
It's not true. I'm innocent.

RIKER
Commander LaForge discovered the 
tampering using this tricorder.

Geordi holds up the tricorder.

RIKER (CONT.)
We'll leave it to you to 
investigate, Governor, but I 
predict that the trail will lead 
you to this man. 

TROI
And perhaps some accomplices.

EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)

The Enterprise is in orbit around Denarra Three.

INT. MAIN BRIDGE

Picard, Riker, Beverly, Troi, Data, Worf, and 
Geordi are present.

RIKER
Final preparations complete, 
Captain. Ready to leave orbit 
anytime.

WORF
Sir, we are being hailed by 
Governor Lang.

PICARD
On screen.

Lang appears on the screen.

LANG
Good news, Captain. The medicine 
has been manufactured, under 
tight controls, and administered 
to over five hundred patients 
planetwide. People are rejoicing 
everywhere.

PICARD
Wonderful news, Governor.

LANG
Our investigation into the 
tampering has implicated Senator 
Keller and several of his aides. 
They will stand trial for 
attempted murder.
(a beat)
On a happier note, I have asked 
Starfleet to drop all plans to 
hold an inquiry into the earlier 
incident, and expressed our 
appreciation for all your help.

PICARD
I would like to say, Governor, 
that there may be other, similar 
ways in which the Federation 
could assist Denarra Three, while 
working within the constraints 
imposed by your society's 
beliefs. Better communication 
might help us find such 
opportunities.

LANG
We stand ready to improve such 
communication channels, Captain. 
While our concerns about 
technology remain, we see the 
benefits of continued contact 
with the rest of the Federation.

PICARD
Good luck, Governor.

LANG
And to you, Captain, and your 
crew. On behalf of my family, and 
all Denarrans, thank you.

PICARD
Enterprise out.

The Governor's image is replaced by a view of the 
star field.

RIKER
New course laid in as you 
requested, sir.

Picard sits down in his chair, next to Beverly. He 
is obviously pleased with the outcome of the 
mission.

PICARD 
(to Beverly)
Doctor, we have you to thank for 
this outcome. Would you do the 
honors?

Beverly points her finger in the air, in imitation 
of Picard.

BEVERLY 
Engage.

FADE OUT.

-THE END-

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Steve Cole  (steve@sep.stanford.edu, apple!sep!steve)
Department of Geophysics, Stanford University, Stanford, CA 94305



